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  1. ...good!
    (but the pic shows the swing on the heart side...should be on $ side..:) no?)

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    1. अपना दिल आज भी पैसे से भरी है अमित जी

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    2. arrey bhai waah! I thought the illustration was to enhance the pain in haiku, but it turned out to be something else!
      kavita likhi hai duniya pe aur dil dikha rahe ho apna? hahaha...liked it:)

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  2. This made me smile,
    I have written a few haiku in hindi too,:)

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